She withered as I stirred…..
Emaciated by the unlit days
of solitude…
of pain.
I stroked to revive her
I urged her to smell, to dream
of loveliness…..
of lyrics.
I dwelled in her essence
nurtured by her effervescence.
Now gone…
forever.
And now am left forlorn…
Left with my tears and prayers
of sunshine,
of memories…
written by ananya chatterjee
i feel there's more unsaid to the poem than there is said... is it the unquenched pain of non-expression that gives this piece its forlorn air? i shall never know, for often is the poem unreachable to the poet, after it is born. and i am only the poet's mortal friend... :)
ReplyDeletei cudnt hav defined my state any better..............thanks babe...i really feel better...
ReplyDeleteamar khub bhalo legeche! :)
ReplyDeletetender, subtle.........as usual brilliant :)
ReplyDeletethanks zee....finally...and amrita...mmuuuuuaaaahhhh
ReplyDeletesoulful and delicate....weaved fascinatingly....
ReplyDeletethank u dear
ReplyDeleteNice poem Ananya. Loved it completely. :)
ReplyDeletehey thr...thnks...
ReplyDeleteVery touchy and evocative of one's feeling of isolation in the absence of one's loved one,whom one had seen being absent ,perhaps through a process,however what's the significance of "prayer of sunshine" or should it have been prayer for ....?
ReplyDeletesir thiki bolechen ota prayer for ii hobe of hobena :p
ReplyDeleteyabba dabba doo that actually spoke to me...
ReplyDeletewow ... you do justice to pouring!
superb! :D
p.s. you bengali?
aapni kaimun aachin :D
thenku thenku.....that was very nice of u......
ReplyDeleteand yes i m a bengali ar ami bhishon bhalo achi...apni kamon?
its hard to let go your love,and move on..
ReplyDeletewell done :)
sure susan thanks......hugs for ya
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