Friday, May 15, 2009

They say she died a natural death
slithered into the abyss of nocturnal peace
Said, no agony tormented her splintered core
Shut away from the realms of veracity


She bled her final dregs of dreams
soaked herself in the bloody past
the bruises of shame of ignominy of pain
but, they say a natural death… she died


she slept to fight the despair
moved not her lips, escaped not her fears
but her heart lingered bare, rusted…
until one day she died a natural death

Macabre reveries of gory shame
incontrovertible and undeniable
decomposed and putrid masses
surrounding the empty platter called 'life'

and then a natural death.........

written by ananya chatterjee

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22 comments:

  1. zeenatMay 15, 2009 at 11:32 AM

    bhalo likhechish :)

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  2. ananya chatterjeeMay 15, 2009 at 11:35 AM

    :) thanks

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  3. ARINDAM DEYMay 15, 2009 at 12:06 PM

    Good work! Nice presentation!

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  4. JadisMay 15, 2009 at 12:52 PM

    hitting in a would-be casual tone. i'd say the language belies the tone, and vice-versa which lends the piece its charm. Also, i can see just ONE comma. No other punctuation. Which is so essentially gothic. Technically.

    Loved it. (:

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  5. AnyaMay 15, 2009 at 7:41 PM

    i am 27 and i haveta fill an adults only form to enter your page.. dont i look like a matured adult?

    chriz

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  6. ananya chatterjeeMay 15, 2009 at 11:32 PM

    @ arindam hey thanks...

    @ pria u know how very much i hate punctuations and nw that u tell me it snds gothic m gonna do dat more babe...[chuckles]

    @ chronicwriter... its a virtual world u dnt look anything to me......;)
    and y cant i access ur blog???

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  7. sanely insaneMay 17, 2009 at 9:41 AM

    itna sad sad kyon bhaee?

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  8. ananya chatterjeeMay 17, 2009 at 10:18 AM

    sad kyun?
    pata nahin....guess am addicted to it.....:P

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  9. nabarunMay 17, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    jonmiley moritey hobey janey to sobai
    tobey moroney moroney anek tafat achey bhai
    sob moron noi soman

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  10. TheJhalMuri GuyMay 17, 2009 at 11:43 AM

    words are mere illustrations of a mind...but some words just form the most variegated emotions...the most stupendous...sometimes the most diatribe...and this is nothing but a ocean of emotions...presented the most suitable way....
    this post till now is the best.....:)

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  11. ananya chatterjeeMay 17, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    @ meshon darun define korecho perfect

    @ sayantan thankew dear huggles for u

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  12. Rain GirlMay 18, 2009 at 2:31 AM

    sad..macabre

    but beautiful... :)

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  13. AnonymousMay 18, 2009 at 4:11 AM

    Ananya I 1st time visit ur blog..Good work...The poem entirely matches to this background color of this blog..Keep it up

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  14. ananya chatterjeeMay 18, 2009 at 4:18 AM

    @ rain gal..thanks its good to hear frm u

    @ anonymous thanks bt next time do leave ur name.......:)

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  15. AnonymousMay 18, 2009 at 4:19 AM

    lovely poem :)

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  16. ananya chatterjeeMay 18, 2009 at 4:29 AM

    thank u so much.......:)

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  17. Americanising DesiMay 19, 2009 at 5:59 AM

    extraordinarily WOW!
    i envy you for the charm you spill!

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  18. ananya chatterjeeMay 19, 2009 at 6:38 AM

    u made my day..... thank u babe.....[:)]

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  19. richard glassupMay 21, 2009 at 1:07 AM

    that was good

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  20. ani_asetJune 20, 2009 at 12:48 AM

    its lovely, from a poem of love i jump to the dark side ..you wrote it well

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  21. workhardSeptember 22, 2009 at 9:12 AM

    Ur writing is excellent...

    Domain registration india

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  22. ananya chatterjeeSeptember 24, 2009 at 12:33 PM

    thanks again....ummmm am loving it

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