Atonement
for sins, for fruits of passion
for desires, for deception
for the loss of innocence
for the demonstration of grime
Death
The purgation, the atonement.
The callous conspiracy of fate
The detachment or the conduit
Or a playful symphony
that brings the end
Birth
The origin, the beginning.
The chance for atonement
Or an escape from it?
Clemency or retribution.
Or simply a paradox to the eternity- death
Trauma
10 months ago
Life
ReplyDeletea continuation...
an oasis of light,joy,hope
a reason 2 luk 4 dat pot of gold at d end of a rainbow
a Miracle-juxtaposition of birth n death
the optimistic u......... oh how i envy u
ReplyDeleteAtonement-death-birth... my favourite subjects..and err.. maybe I am wrong.. but her writing reminds me.. Plath meeting Dickinson.. sitting near the lake.. talking about life and death... long lost friends among nature's melee....this piece is eerily beautiful..
ReplyDeletethat's a superb reflection babe!...we all walk in the darkling plain....but when the guy with the scythe appears..everything just snaps... be it the pleasures of life.. or the sinful delights!...i loved the last line....so true..
ReplyDelete@ sayantan......... ohmygod plath? dickinson? wat? u intend to give me an attack of some sort
ReplyDelete@ debolina pleasures and delight i even like the sound of thm. sinful be the cream
P.S. thankewww so much guys
very senecan... ;)
ReplyDeletelove it... makes you wanna go back and think, if you know what i mean... and also about our discussion the other day- isn't death the effect of birth, and atonement everything that comes in between?
yes or maybe like i sd death is the new beginning and birth had been the process for atonement
ReplyDeleteI like the order..atonement-death-birth... new yes.
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ReplyDeleteDeath is reborn of another spirit of new born...Its exactly crrct..Death wll b a forgiveness to all humnty life..
ReplyDeleteWonderfully poised, graciously deep.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
thankew
ReplyDeleteI like the expressions! Keep it up
ReplyDeletesimple choice of words and a smatter of emotions...very cool!
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@ soumya thank u.
ReplyDelete@ scribblers thanks for stoppin by
awsumly nice...keep it up
ReplyDelete@ hut up n write thankeww girl
ReplyDeleteYOu need to update.
ReplyDeletei know bt i dnt know wat to ryt :(
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing..!
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