Wednesday, August 5, 2009

One day I did spread my wings, one day I did somersault, one day I ate chocolates and didn’t stop until my tummy ached, one day I stood on the rooftops with dews caressing my naked shoulders, one day I screamed and screamed till nothing else would ring in my ears but my own sore voice. One day I did catch the first rays of the sun, made a fireball and threw it to the horizon, one day I caught the shadows and stored it in my Pandora box, one day I blindfolded myself and threw myself in his arms, one day I slept and never had to get up. One day I got drunk and did not have to make excuses to my mum, one day I picked up the devil from a bar, one day I stole the summer tint and painted the winter green, one day I danced in the radiant river fall. One day my ashes flew in wind, one day my dreams were sold, one day my memoirs were auctioned and the poorest purchased it all. One day I did smile, one day I did feel my tears dry, one day I woke up once again, one day I did find myself amidst the thousand me…. one day I did try and achieved more than just whispers, I got my song. One day I found that one day.

27 comments:

  1. one day, i found that day ! that was thick :) loved it :) and well, added you for i found you better :D and i envy your folk for being on the rec'ving end of gifts :P

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  2. bahoba sabash mumpu ei to chai. urtey koto maja achey.onekdin badey tor lakha. soburey meoa pholey.

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  3. @ shravan...hey thanks dear........and gifts? ummm u cud say that...bt thn id rather hav a rakhi than a gift re.......

    @ meshon love u meshon...mmuuuaaahhhh

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  4. jeeo guru....lovd it

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  5. yknow what.

    one day. maybe you will delete this post. and we'll know it's come full circle. all the best... :)

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  6. Wow take a bow ananya..what superb writing..why dont you put it in paras..would look better isnt it..makes it easier to read

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  7. thanks dear bt it came so impulsively didnt quite wnt to alter its natural form

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  8. Then i appreciate it the way it is..too good :)

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  9. Always you starts from pleasure to Dark..One day just write Dark to Pleasure.?But your words have some enchantic and fruitful...

    One day you will stand behind the Blog..

    What a good thinking..!!!!

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  10. suman chakravartyAugust 7, 2009 at 9:21 AM

    This is too good,rich in emotional spice that makes the presentation not only rich but highly palatable,really too good and being in his arms is fine too but a bit away from personalised evocation, somewhat supplicating to that typical love lorn saga,this is but a minor aberration,otherwise just excellent.

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  11. lol..very nice phrasing re!.....
    the best of course was "one day i found that one day!"
    write more stuff like dis!!!!

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  12. @ sir.......thanks sir

    @ neethi hey babe hws u newaz
    and thanks :)
    i will try re

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  13. That was awesomewriting..

    My fav line..one day I danced in the radiant river fall


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  14. Ananya...manifest about your new Thoughts.You are really different.

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  15. that was deep...
    i liked it very much...

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  16. :) thank u dear

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  17. no clu re.......bt i will asap........ and just left u a little note.. :)

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  18. try writing a haiku or a 55er anything..keep writing

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  19. na i dnt lyk haikus
    and moreover makin an effort and writin....i dnt lyk dat...it has to be an utterance, and nt a well revised one

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  20. ok guess will hav to wait in that case :D

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  22. Hey Ananya You are special.U definitely needs to be enter into Writers World..I request you to come out from Darkness..If not interested,come out once in a month??????

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